02 // Words

Tone, phrasing
and what not to say.

Register & Tone

How each register sounds.

Tone is what this page owns. Terminology it borrows — see the firewall below and the note attached to it.

BEDROCK Evidentiary
RegisterFormal. Third person. No contractions.
NumbersLead with them. Every figure invites verification.
Sentence lengthShort. One claim per sentence.
RequiredForward-looking disclaimer. RevCon™ 3 baseline stated explicitly.
NeverSuperlatives, exclamation, upside-led framing, any claim a data table cannot carry.
CATALYST Confident
RegisterDirect. Second person permitted. Contractions fine.
NumbersSame conservatism as Bedrock. An investor who later becomes a project-finance counterparty must never feel the numbers changed register.
Sentence lengthVaried. One long sentence for rhythm against short ones.
RequiredMoat stated plainly, not implied.
Never“Novel technology”, “breakthrough science”, upside presented as baseline, anything Bedrock would have to walk back.
COMMONS Plain-spoken
RegisterWarm. Second person. Contractions expected.
NumbersTranslated. Jobs, salaries, what it means for the town.
Sentence lengthShort and open. Read it aloud first.
RequiredEvery claim links to its source.
NeverJargon without translation, corporate distance, technical acronyms carrying the sentence.
Approved Phrasing & Never Say

The Language Firewall.

An absolute separation between Carbotura language and the legacy waste industry. A single use of waste-triggering language in an official record can be cited by a regulator to support waste facility classification.

The canon governs, not this table. This is a convenience copy so authors do not leave the page mid-sentence. Where the two disagree the canon wins — correct the table, never the canon.

VERIFIED AGAINST CARBOTURA CANON RELEASE 88 · 3 SEPTEMBER 2026

The stamp is the mechanism. This table went stale three times while it lived on the Foundation page: it carried Circular Offtake Agreement after Release 13, Molecular reforming after Release 35, and RevCon™ Materials after Release 45. Each survived because nothing recorded which release it had last been checked against.

Canon also moves in the other direction, which is the less obvious reason to keep the stamp current. A bare TMC Fee was restricted to agent and operational use for several releases; Release 50 made it fully interchangeable with Beneficiation Fee in any context, including investor-facing. A table stamped before Release 50 would have authors correcting something that is now correct.

If the stamp is older than the current release, treat every row as unverified — in both directions.

Always useNever use
Advanced Circular Manufacturing (ACM)Waste management / waste processing
Total Material Conversion (TMC)Waste diversion / waste reduction
Manufacturing feedstock / OmniCrude™Waste / trash / refuse / solid waste / MSW / garbage
OmniCrude™ (intermediate state output of Regenesis™)Processed waste / shredded waste / pre-treated waste
Modular factory / ACM facilityWaste plant / processing facility / MRF / transfer station
Recyclotron™ / Microwave Catalytic ReformingIncinerator / furnace / burner
Elemental dissociation (anoxic, electromagnetic)Combustion / incineration / burning
Feedstock Haulers (enclosed delivery)Waste haulers / garbage trucks / trash collection
Feedstock supplier / feedstock sourceWaste generator / waste customer
Regenesis™ NodeSatellite waste processor / remote treatment unit
OmniCrude™ HaulersWaste transport / processed waste haulers
Circular Supply Agreement (CSA)Waste hauling contract / disposal agreement / Circular Offtake Agreement (COA)
Material transfers to Carbotura under the CSACarbotura buys / purchases the feedstock, waste, material or inventory
Beneficiation Fee (TMC Fee)Tipping fees / disposal fees / gate fees / dumping fees
Circular Royalty™ (conversion royalty)Rebate / revenue share / discount / dividend
Manufactured materials / Circular MaterialsRecycled materials / byproducts / residuals
Liquifact™ (liquid extraction product)Leachate / liquid waste
Near-zero-emission manufacturingLow-emission / reduced-emission
APS Product Recovery SystemPollution controls / scrubbers / filters
Revenue Stack (7 streams)Single-revenue model / tipping-fee dependent
Island Mode (grid-independent)Grid-dependent / utility-connected
SMU (buffer storage only — NOT standard Pregenesis™ output)Baled waste / compacted waste / standard output
Feedstock receiving bay (enclosed, airlocked)Tipping floor / waste pit / dump pit
Proprietary integration of proven technologiesNew technology / novel technology / experimental
Engineering innovation / integration innovationScientific breakthrough / invention / discovery

Carve-outs matter as much as prohibitions. “Waste” is permitted when describing how others classify material (“what your community currently classifies as waste”), when naming the legacy industry, and in disassociation framing — “Carbotura is not waste-to-energy” is compliant, and softening it into euphemism to dodge the string is not. Strip those and authors either over-correct or stop trusting the list.

The Waste Study deliverable name is exempt (Release 54, Architect ruling). The filename waste-study.html, its title, its vote slug and every cross-reference across all community packages stay as they are — the document studies the community’s existing waste system as externally classified, the same posture as the waste-classified carve-out. Never flag the name.

But read the boundary precisely: the exemption covers the name, not the contents. Inside that document, describing Carbotura’s own inputs as “waste” is still a violation. A carve-out on a title is not a licence for the body copy beneath it.

Direction of money is a mechanic, never a register choice (Releases 62, 63, 72, 80, 81 — five releases circling one rule). The public voice may simplify WHAT Carbotura does. It may not state or imply WHO PAYS WHOM. Simplifying a mechanic does not produce a simpler true statement; it produces a different, false one — and it lands on the same reader who later sits across a table where the real direction applies.

The canonical shape, in full:

Ownership of the material transfers to Carbotura at collection or delivery. The Feedstock Provider pays the Beneficiation Fee for Total Material Conversion. Carbotura pays the Circular Royalty™ on delivered tonnage. Independent gross transactions, never netted. No purchase price is paid for the material.

The royalty is Carbotura’s cost of goods for the raw material, and the only cost it bears for that feedstock — no purchase price, no acquisition cost, no procurement line, no collection cost.

Two ways to get this wrong, and both read as fixes. The first is netting: “our only feedstock cost” printed beside a fee we collect is one step from a net position, which the Accounting Policy Memo bars outright. The second is over-correction — “we pay a royalty” alone presents one flow as the whole relationship, and that habit is how “we buy your waste” got written in the first place.

Naming a thing to disclaim it stays compliant. “It is not a purchase” and “no purchase price is paid” are correct, the same posture as the waste-to-energy carve-out. And two purchase uses survive because neither is inbound material: investors purchase securities, and industrial counterparties purchase Circular Materials. Cash moves in the stated direction in both. Do not sweep them.

What this stamp does not cover, learned the hard way on 3 September 2026. Re-deriving 61→88 found Circular Offtake Agreement — retired at Release 13 — still live as “30-year COAs” on the Foundation page, seventy-five releases later. It is the same term named three paragraphs above as the reason this table was moved and stamped.

The move fixed the table and left the page. A stamp certifies the rows beneath it, not the document around it, and the term had simply been sitting outside the box that got audited. It also survived the first grep of this pass, because the pattern tested COA with a word boundary and the page says COAs.

So: re-derivation runs over the whole surface, not the stamped block, and a plural is the cheapest way for a retired term to outlive the rule that retired it.

Trademarks: every occurrence takes the mark (Release 56, Architect ruling). Vortex™, Pregenesis™, Regenesis™, Regenesis MAX™, Exogenesis™, Recyclotron™, Liquifact™, OmniCrude™, RevCon™ and Circular Royalty™ carry ™ on every use — including repeated tier labels down a table column, items in a list, and chart axis ticks. There is no first-use exemption.

Zero marks anywhere in a document remains a fail. And the correction only ever runs one way: marks get added, never thinned. Anything authored during the brief window when first-prominent-use was the guidance gets the missing marks put back.

So set them well — that part is this guide’s job. Per-occurrence marking is a real typographic load, and the answer is to make the glyph quiet rather than to skip it. Use the true ™ character, never a superscript hack on a capital TM. Give it its own class so it does not inherit display tracking:

.tm { font-size: 0.62em; line-height: 0; vertical-align: 0.42em;
      letter-spacing: 0; margin-left: 0.04em; }

At that size a repeated mark reads as texture rather than as a stack of glyphs interrupting every row. In a dense numeric table, right-align the figures and let the marked name sit in its own left column so the ™ never lands between a reader and a number.

How this one was decided, and why it is worth remembering. For about a day this rule was contested. The Architect ruled “Add the TMs” in a session and 262 per-occurrence marks shipped; hours later Release 55 ruled the opposite, first-prominent-use. Neither knew about the other — they were cut in mutual ignorance, on the same day, on the same question.

This guide recorded the collision instead of quietly picking a side. Release 56 then resolved it with both rulings in view, exercising Release 55’s own override clause. The 262 shipped marks became precedent rather than an exception.

The reason to keep the story: had the guide simply published the newer release as settled, the estate would have started thinning marks that the Architect had explicitly asked for — and the disagreement would have surfaced later as a mystery, after the sweep. A rule that two authorities state differently is a finding, not an editorial problem to tidy.

Bridging From Legacy Language

Meeting people where they are.

Rhetorical moves for bringing a reader from legacy framing into ACM framing. These are yours to use freely.

The refinery analogyThe primary bridge. “We are to waste what a refinery is to crude oil — except our crude comes from everything.” Canonical, and the most effective frame for every audience.
RFP legacy languageWhen responding to an RFP issued in legacy terms, acknowledge “what your community currently classifies as waste” or “material currently managed under waste-domain procurement.” In Carbotura’s own voice it is always manufacturing feedstock.
Hauler conversionLegacy hauling companies become Feedstock Haulers within the supply chain. Frame it as a role they move into, not a business they lose.
Disassociation“Not a waste company.” “Not waste-to-energy.” Naming the category to disclaim it is compliant and often necessary.
Status Claims — Gated

This one is not a writing decision.

Stop. A sentence that asserts what a facility legally is — “has transitioned”, “reclassified”, “no longer a waste facility”, “manufacturing, not waste” — is governed by the Legal Milestone Register, not by this guide. It requires an actual instrument, counsel countersignature and Corpus owner sign-off.

This is a release gate, not an advisory step. Check the Register; never re-derive it.

Why this sits next to the firewall rather than inside it. The firewall catches banned words. This catches true-sounding words used too early — a sentence can be entirely vocabulary-clean and still assert a classification that has not been legally earned. The Tuscany stall in February 2026 was exactly that: terminology was not at issue in the letter. Both checks run independently on the same document.